Great to see a YouTuber of Yong's reach cover this. Would love to have a Jim Stephanie Sterling one, and a SkillUp one too. But Yong is basically one of the biggest out there.
You can see he's not familiar with football, or with the series. Some of the comparisons he makes with FIFA are comparisons he could have made with PES itself (e.g., the yearly release cycle and wiping of myClub content before now). But his arguments are still sound. (Oh, and the less said about his pronunciation of "Juventus", the better!)
I found it interesting that one aspect of the monetisation he singled out as scummy is the selling of individual modes in a game that's marketed as F2P. I haven't seen people making this argument, but it's a good one. I've seen people try and spin it as (following Adam's lead), "just imagine how great ML will be now that we're paying specifically for it!", which was always complete guff. No, not only is there no compulsion to make a good ML just because it's being sold individually, it's also a fucking cheek that they are carving up the complete game into sections, and giving away the gambling part of the game "for free".